User talk:Kanraru/sandbox/draft

Feedback on article draft
Hi, great job so far on your article draft! You got some useful feedback from the others and I recommend that you consider all of their advice. I'm also curious about what you will make of the controversies section.


 * One point I feel could use some elaboration is the meaning of "subculture based."
 * I think Wikipedia readers might be interested in a more thourough comparison between namuwiki and Korean Wikipedia.

Overall you're doing well! I'm excited to see how this article develops! Groceryheist (talk) 05:51, 6 February 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hey there! Great additions so far. I would just add a citation to that January 2019 statistic regarding how many articles it has. I also like the uniqueness that this Wiki has regarding your Articles section, but I think you might need a citation for that? I think it's a great start and I hope you find some good information for your Controversies section! Make sure you have a new heading for References though, since right now those links at the bottom look like they're connected to the Controversies.

And just out of curiosity, is there any information on the people who created the Wiki? That might be an interesting thing too! Great job so far. :)

Reinako (talk) 23:19, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi Kanraru,

I post the peer review in your user sandbox page last Friday and I will post it in your draft talk page again.

You did a great job bringing new content to the Namuwiki. It's well-organized and you made it clear which part is new added.

I think currently you need to finish the blank section such as controversies and criticisms. Also,it would be better to explain why the Korean wiki is Paraguay based. For people like me who's not familiar with the topic, I definitely expect to see some context based on this.

For sources, providing some diverse sources in English might be better. But I'm not sure if there are any valuable such, so it's just a suggestion.

Great job! Realyuang (talk) 21:37, 3 February 2019 (UTC)