User talk:Kappanjoe/My Brother's Husband sandbox

U0820540's Peer Review
Seems like you chose very interesting manga to talk about. I saw your draft page and I really liked how you wrote all the details about the manga. I think you have pretty solid sources as well. It would be interesting to include how did critics or audiences respond to this particular work. So far everything looks really great. I can tell that you have put lots of time into it. Keep up the great work!

U0820540 (talk) 11:54, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Shoujess' Peer Review (copied from User:Kappanjoe/sandbox)
Once I get some time I totally want to sit down and read this. I think the character section could use just a little bit of detail but I like how it gives enough information away (like how they met or how Mike helps a neighborhood kid) without being a full blown recap of the story. Has there been much said on the live adaption? The reorganization of the page helps it read better. All in all, looks fantastic. Shoujess (talk) 19:49, 7 April 2018 (UTC)

Copied from User:Kappanjoe/sandbox Kappanjoe (talk) 23:17, 7 April 2018 (UTC)

CT Feedback
I'm in agreement with your classmates. This is looking like a much higher quality article. If you have time to start a "Critical Response" section, that would be great. It doesn't have to be fleshed out or include everything you found, but if you at least start it, others can come along and add to it later. Ctextor at uofu (talk) 14:42, 10 April 2018 (UTC)