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Peer Review for Kar71000's article by Tthoma84
Statistics were super great A great source for some statistical and analytical input would be The New Jim Crow: Mass Incarceration in the Age of Colorblindness by Michelle Alexander=phenomenal and written by a Black woman More Wikilinks to terms that have already been written about would help contextualize for people unfamiliar with this very important issue (i.e. all those blue words that you see on other WIkipedia pages those link would be a great addition to this article, if the links are meaningful of course) Also when you mention a statistic it is helpful to the reader that you cite that information within the paragraph

Kalynn's Peer Review
- Overall the article was very insightful and you discussed a lot that was new to me dealing with incarceration in the U.S.

- The article was not biased at all everything came from general sources and I feel like you elaborated on it to your best ability.

- I would suggest you to link your sources to the bits of information included in your articles just for clarification and so that we as the audience get a sense of where your analysis is coming from.

- I also think you might need a little improvement on labeling your sub topics for example for the second draft I feel like it should have been changed to 2.0 instead of a continuation of the first draft.

- Your facts are very reliable and your sources are credible

Kalynnmc — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kalynnmc (talk • contribs) 03:29, 29 November 2018 (UTC)