User talk:Karaganr1/Montipora grisea

Dr. White's critique of your first draft
'''To what sections of the Wiki article are you adding this information? Where are your in-text citations?'''

Article body They have small bumps, known as thecal papillae, that are fused together around the corallite. They also have a coenosteum papillae that is present. Belonging to class Anthozoa, [this is already in the article] these corals can be hermaphroditic or gonochoric. Their zygote produces planktonic planula larvae. Metamorphosis takes place early before larval settlement occurs on the opposite side of the mouth.

References References are formatted incorrectly. Veron, J. E. N. (John E. N., & Australian Institute of Marine Science. (1993). A biogeographic database of hermatypic coral species of the central Indo-Pacific, genera of the world. Australian Institute of Marine Science. Bernard, H. M. (1897). XI.—Notes, morphological and systematic, on the Madreporarian Subfamily Montiporinæ (Montipora and Anacropora), with an account of the Phylogeny of the Madreporidæ. 20, 117–135. Khalesi, M. K. (2015). Corals. Springer Handbook of Marine Biotechnology, 179–217.

'''Overall, your information adds a lot to the existing article, although it does not flow well and you need to specify to what section you are adding each piece of information. Be sure to include in text citations and links to other Wikipedia sites. You need to add an image. Your peer review has some good suggestions to follow as well, but ignore the comment on leaving out information that is in the current article, you will be adding to that article, not the other way around.'''

Whiteamphipod (talk) 16:13, 22 October 2021 (UTC)