User talk:Karakopcso/sandbox

Homework February 3rd
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vichy_France This article is not very comprehensible because of the huge amount of information.
 * I agree that the article is too long and poorly organized, but there's only so much you can do in the limited time you have. Of course you can work on it in your spare time, but for this assignment only focus on fixing a few problems with grammar and clarity. For example, there are some comma problems in the first paragraph. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:39, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry to say your edits didn't really help with the comma problems. In fact, most of the commas you removed were correct and helpful. I recommend that you revert the changes. If you want to improve the article, move the very first comma - it should go after the parentheses. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:06, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

Homework February 9th
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Christian_Songs Karakopcso (talk) 23:42, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Approved. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:22, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Your sources look good. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:54, 16 February 2015 (UTC)