User talk:Karenwesseling/sandbox

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This page is not unambiguously promotional, because... (your reason here) --Karenwesseling (talk) 17:25, 5 April 2017 (UTC) it is a product that is paving the way for other wireless display products and is used as the validation platform for other wireless display functionalities. I'm a tech writer from Canada and I've been working on this page since November. I saw this product at the Microsoft conference and know how revolutionary this is. Sorry if I've injected some of my enthusiasm for the product. Can I remove anything that seems overly promotional and re-submit? Do you want to identify for me what you think is overly promotional?

Should I remove this content?

ScreenBeam’s most awarded receiver (see Industry Impact),

industries are all experiencing a significant impact from wireless display. ScreenBeam receivers are taking over conference rooms and classrooms.

Celebrated by Best in Biz as one of the top 5 Most Awarded Companies in 2016, Actiontec | ScreenBeam is taking the lead in the wireless display industry with partnerships with Intel, Microsoft, Miracast and the Wi-Fi Alliance.

Meeting their strict standards for wireless display performance and reliability,