User talk:Kari's username/Newman Lake/Jaeden Akins Peer Review

Thank you!
I appreciate the feedback! Once you pointed it out, I realized having the "Fish" section precede the "History" section was really awkward; I'm so glad you pointed this out and I updated the layout to reflect your suggestions.

And you're right about the underlined section - I remembered reading something about a railroad transit service operating in the area and wanted to include it, but I'm struggling to remember where I read that. If I don't find the source soon I'll likely just omit it.

Thank you again for taking the time to look at my article! Kari&#39;s username (talk) 22:15, 4 December 2023 (UTC)