User talk:KarimMcMaster

Welcome!
Hello, KarimMcMaster, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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student critique
Your article does not contain much information try to find good reliable research to enhance the current article. Things like feedback loops could be used to add to your topic environment(systems). — Preceding unsigned comment added by GERVAIM (talk • contribs) 03:00, 24 March 2019 (UTC)