User talk:KarolWalec/sandbox

--Jmanoog (talk) 18:23, 28 March 2022 (UTC) Here is my peer review for your section on red bioluminescence. Overall, great job! I added a potential idea just to expand this topic a bit, but I thought your focus on morphology was particularly helpful in expanding this Wiki page.

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

KarolWalec

Link to draft you're reviewing

User:KarolWalec/sandbox

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Malacosteus niger

Evaluate the drafted changes

With such a complicated mechanism to describe, it would be really easy to use "close paraphrasing" that is not in line with Wikipedia's policies. You did a great job of summarizing the findings of your reference without falling into this trap of "close paraphrasing." It may be useful to expand a bit on how this quality of red bioluminescence is useful for predation, as the article does not make a clear link between red bioluminescence and the inability of prey to see this wavelength (not just those with other forms of blue/green bioluminescence). Otherwise, you did a great job with a very technical addition that will help provide clarity regarding the morphological background behind M. niger's red bioluminescence.