User talk:KartikeyaS343/Archives/2020/August

Draft:Phil Greiss
Hello - I just got noticed that the article phil greiss had been denied

there must be some mistake as most of the references are from trusted outside source such as the latin grammy award website, allmusic.com, various audio professional website, discogs etc

doing a search on google re. Phil Greiss also coroborates most if not all the article's points

I would like to understand what can be done to get this approved as it is merelly a rewritting of a previous article that was redacted in french, and approved back then?

thank you for your help

take care — Preceding unsigned comment added by Henri Grace (talk • contribs) 22:50, 2 August 2020 (UTC)
 * The draft needs to pass WP:MUSICBIO for acceptance. A passing mention or credit link is not sufficient to establish notability. Thank you. -- KartikeyaS (talk) 06:01, 3 August 2020 (UTC)

good work
Just to avoid doubt I want to make it clear that I agree with almost all of your decisions, & the one or two I've noticed were not completely unreasonable. ( of course I haven't looked at the ones on popular music I am unqualified there, but you're doing just fine with companies and their people)  DGG ( talk ) 00:31, 3 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for checking. I appreciate it and it means a lot to me :) -- KartikeyaS (talk) 05:49, 3 August 2020 (UTC)

Rejection of Draft:Bharti Infratel
Hi, you recently reviewed my draft Draft:Bharti Infratel and rejected it, its the first draft I've created so I wanted to know your thoughts on what was missing and how I can improve the article's notability so that it is accepted. Thanks  Debit pixie 💬 03:52, 3 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Hello, the draft is missing independent reliable sources. At present it only proves that the company exists but does not state why it is notable for inclusion. Company listings, press rleases, annoucements or any kinds of routine coverages do not establish notability. You may check WP:NCORP for the relevant criteria. Thank you. -- KartikeyaS (talk) 05:58, 3 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi, I had added some news articles regarding the merger but that may not be enough, I'll add some more details through articles maybe regarding the company history, services or IPO. Do you mind if I ask you to review my article again some time down the line?  Debit pixie 💬 06:14, 3 August 2020 (UTC)
 * You can always re-submit your draft after improvements so any reviewer including me can review it again. Thanks, -- KartikeyaS (talk) 06:20, 3 August 2020 (UTC)

Add more secondary sources in my creation
Hi @KartikeyaS343, Thank you for your review and comment. As you suggested me, I will try to add more secondary sources in the first part of my creation "KOBIL Systems". I have already 3 of them, would be enough or should I search for other? Have a nice time! Best Regards, Nerilda — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nerilda Meda (talk • contribs) 14:58, 10 August 2020 (UTC)