User talk:KasasiJohn

Your edit at Sodium–sulfur battery
KJ, thanks for your edit. It would be good if you could take another pass and do some style fixes. E.g. don't capitalize words in headings, use normal heading markup instead of just bolding, use en-dash between parallel items such as lead–acid and sodium–sulfur, etc. Please respond here if you'd like help on how to go about improving your edits. Otherwise I might get around to working on it myself; but it's a good chance for you to develop your skills as an editor. Dicklyon (talk) 04:38, 22 November 2021 (UTC)