User talk:KasiahsMom/sandbox

For your article on Oregon DOC, I see it has listed fallen officers, are there any inmates who have died by the hands of CO's or other inmate attacks? This could be good substance to add. Also maybe rates of recidivism in Oregon prisons and what the overarching goal of DOC is and if it is successful in its effects. You could also see if there are issues of overpopulation in Oregon prisons and touch on that, as well as go into maybe talk about the prison industrial complex from an objective standpoint, just talking about how many prisoners seek employment while incarcerated and end up contributing to the laundry of major government entities (particularly hospitals) as well as building furniture for buildings of such nature including universities. They also have call centers and book binding and many other ways in which in exchange for very cheap labor costs, inmates provide for the general public. If I think of anything else I will let you know!

Tyler TF951497642 (talk) 09:26, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

Hi there! I think this is a great article to improve. Does the Oregon DOC have any certain priorities or mission when it comes to how they operate their facilities? That may be interesting to have to see if they are doing anything different in comparison to other states DOC. Also, there is already a page on Coffee Creek Correctional Facility, but I think that might be an interesting sub-section to add in the article because it is the one facility for women in Oregon and from my knowledge (and a quick Google search), they have had some scandal surrounding Coffee Creek. If they are choosing to include the part about Fallen Officers, I don't see why you couldn't introduce some information about the incarcerated individuals.Imanidorsey13 (talk) 02:53, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

Hey! Just stopping by to do a peer review for the article on Oregon DOC. I think in your research it would be helpful to find more specifics regarding the different prisons in Oregon, and also to add sources when it comes to inmate capacity in each prison. Also regarding the section on Death Row in Oregon, I would find it interesting to add a side note on the prevalance of the death penalty in Oregon, or more details on it (or link to a page that has those details if it exists). I also would be interested in reading more details on the specifics of the officers in the Oregon DOC that have died during active duty. Overall I think this article has a good start and bones to it but theres plenty that you can add NicoleR18 (talk) 19:04, 20 May 2019 (UTC)