User talk:Kassafrass/Neurodiversity

Hannah's Peer Review
I believe that everything seems relevant to the topic of the article. I would be curious to see some more expansion on therapeutic interventions-which is seems like you indicate you will be getting to soon at the bottom of your sandbox. Or maybe also some correlates back to neuroscience/neurobiology in relation to this Neurodiversity topic. I did make note of the one citation/sentence that says that most of the work towards being more inclusive of Neurodiversity in the workplace is centered around individuals with autism. I would challenge this a little bit, as yes, there is a large push for this-but also ID's in general, and even ADHD is more widely talked about across multiple settings now. I would consider expanding that sentence to be less exclusive, and broadening the list search on that specific area. I think this ties into the next point of the potential overrepresentation of those with autism versus other areas of neurodiversity. For the citations, everything is looking good on my initial run through. I may provide a few additional comments regarding those as I continue to read through your page. Hhmilius (talk) 16:22, 26 October 2023 (UTC) As I reviewed more, I noticed that some of your citations vary in format. For instance, some dates include month and year-I got flagged in my edits for having the month in there so you can just remove those and have the date. Additionally, some of them are missing the date all together. Overall, you have done a lot of work and I can see how much time and effort you are putting into your edits! Great job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hhmilius (talk • contribs) 23:59, 26 October 2023 (UTC)