User talk:Kassafrass/Neurodiversity/BerryERo Peer Review

So in your first paragraph under "medicine and healthcare" it would make be more clear for the sentence to read "that ARE centered" than "that have centered". It also might be interesting to elaborate further on the part that mentions the neurodiversity clinics in the UK, because otherwise that piece of information seems somewhat random. I think that it is an interesting fact, so I understand why you used it, but it might need to be expanded on to make it more relevant. Other than that, I think it looks really good I think all of the information is very important to add to the wiki page, and all of the sources look like they are valid and reliable. It seems that you summarized the material well and it was easy to understand. BerryERo (talk) 22:57, 26 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks! I went ahead and changed it to "that are centered." I am also planning on adding more to that sentence on clinics in the UK; that was a standalone sentence in the original article, so my plan was to add more to that part in the future! Kassafrass (talk) 01:56, 27 October 2023 (UTC)