User talk:Kassandras1029/sandbox

The provided article on "Censorship of Tiktok" does well to describe the recent history of governments banning the app, however is misleading in its title and lead section. For example, the lead section claims that India only pursued a ban of the app due to conflicts with China, but the article elaborates on prior bans from the country citing indecency on the app. Along with this, another improvement to the lead section would be to mention the Armenian and Pakistani bans as described later in the article. One change to the overall article which would improve its clarity would be further descriptions on why certain countries have decided to ban Tiktok. If the article draftee had chosen to describe examples of the "pornography" and "inappropriate content" which forced bans of the app from India, Bangladesh, Indonesia, and Pakistan, then an understanding of why the censorship occurs can be fortified. Along with this, the use of the word "censorship" in the title is a bit extreme, as it is less of the app being blocked from users to prevent the spread of information but more for its questionable content for specific cultures and concerns of data security on the part of India and the US. As well, more. elaboration should be given to the history of the US ban on Tiktok- though the "Donald Trump- Tiktok Controversy" is cited as a separate article, more information could have been given to contextualize the lawsuit and describe the changes in ownership as a result of the compromise found between Bytedance and the US government. My last recommendation for improving the article would be to keep the capitalization consistent across the lead and "India" section. Overall, however, the article's greatest quality comes from its simplicity in describing different cases of bans based on geography. Vanguard826 (talk) 23:48, 9 October 2021 (UTC)