User talk:Kat von B/Never Apart (Organization)

Hey! I dont know if you got the notice, but i peer reviewed your article. This was my feedback, but incase you didn't get it cause wiki is hard to track, I wrote,

"It was very clear and concise. Maybe italicize titles, add canada after montreal that is in the intro. Organization is clear, well structured. Good use of sources, I'm not sure if you're allowed to use the actual website as a source (idk i read that somewhere in the training modules), but maybe add from one of the press releases that the website provided. But it is a magazine itself or has a magazine so I imagine its valid (its hard to tell with wiki). Everything else looked great."

Cool topic btw. Good luck!