User talk:KateRose/sandbox

Evaluation of the Article
The Professional career section of the article is very choppy. It could use additional information to allow better flow and for all information to tie together. There should also have more information on her indigenous background and how she got to her professional career to add more beneficial information. The introduction does not have as much information as other sections. More information could help the flow, cohesiveness and over all effectiveness of the article. All the links worked and the citations seemed to be fine and without plagiarism.KateRose (talk) 22:34, 18 March 2018 (UTC)