User talk:KatelynWhite1701/sandbox

Edits
Your edits are very well written and are very neutral. Everything you mentioned was a fact, which is good. However, I would make sure you add citation after everything that you did not say, the more the citation the better. The information seems very important and I like that it is up to date. There are more than three citations so you're, good with that. However, make sure you finish adding to your third edit so that you have three sufficient, distinguish edits.

Your last last edit is about the FDA working through the regulations of bioprinting. In this section make sure to add a lot of data and the steps that are currently being taken to pass this regulation. If you want, you can even go into detail about the benefits or what will happen if this is passed.

peer review- Aaliyah Grasty
1) Neutrality- neutral, All in formation Cited, also contains a bit of information that can be added . 2) Sufficient- contains alot of new information that was added. alot of content with citations

3) Citations- proper citations, looking at the citations seem very useful. 4) Language, tone, and clarity- work very clear and welll written to understand what she wnats to add and change, very informative. 5) Assignment- three factual useful edits.