User talk:Katelynczi/sandbox

JACEE’S EDITS- Hey Katelyn, here are my edits for your first draft of your wiki article. Let me know if you have any questions.

Good job on putting your article in story form.

I would recommend to try and establish her notoriety in the first sentence and then continue on with her background information.

“Bonnie is currently THE Professor and Chair….etc.”

I would put her book chapters, journal articles, other contributions in APA format rather than stating them. Some of them are in a close format, but not all.

Also I couldn’t find your references section, do you have one?

Good first draft, just a few random edits here and there. JaCee.D.Aaseth (talk) 23:00, 6 April 2017 (UTC)JaCee Aaseth

Jafrah Edits:

I would add an introduction paragraph about where she currently works and who she is. and maybe give a brief overview of what you are going to talk about. Your second section should include birthplace if you can find it. Your article section looks good. You should have your readings in APA format. Some of your book chapters and articles should be in APA as well. Also looking for a reference section! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jafrah (talk • contribs) 03:39, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

Decent peer edits! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aburnett412 (talk • contribs) 01:57, 26 April 2017 (UTC)