User talk:Katewallace3/sandbox

You have a good start for your article. The starting structure for "History" is a little choppy. It is not smooth or storytelling-like. There isn't very much explanation or description of the why or how. Explain what you mean that Nero embellished the temple. How did he do that? In what way? If you are using this section as an introduction, that is fine. But, I would explain in other parts of the article.

It is important to make sure you cite throughout the article. I know that not all the articles do that, but if I was researching, I would like to know where you got that information. That way I can at least narrow it down what source you used to verify it myself. You appear to have strong and reliable sources. Have you tried ProQuest as well. You just need your log-in for SacState. They have full books for free. To see if they had anything for you, I did a quick search and Pompeii’s Ashes : The Reception of the Cities Buried by Vesuvius in Literature, Music, and Drama seems to be a good source. Did you know they called it the "Temple of Venus" at the beginning of excavation until 1860. That is pretty cool fact. Kimberlytemme (talk) 03:47, 4 November 2017 (UTC)