User talk:Katharine1973

Your submission at Articles for creation: Harry Weinberger (January 10)
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 Onel 5969  TT me 13:22, 10 January 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Harry Weinberger has been accepted
 Harry Weinberger, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! SwisterTwister  talk  19:19, 10 January 2016 (UTC)
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Heinz Koppel
Welcome to Wikipedia. Thank you for your recent article on Harry Weinberger. It looks interesting, and I may make a few improvements to it. You recently editied Heinz Koppel to say that Koppel was Weinberger's cousin, and that they were both taught by Martin Bloch. Can you add a citation for this? I would add it, but I can't access the source you cite in Harry Weinberger. This type of link should be tagged using Template:Subscription required. Verbcatcher (talk) 21:21, 15 January 2016 (UTC)

Harry Weinberger
Thank you for your article on Harry Weinberger. I am concerned that some of the material may only derive from your personal knowledge of Weinberger and his work. This would be break Wikipedia's No original research rule. All content should be based on published sources. See Attribution.

I have removed the Author section, as this is unconventional (and possibly banned) on Wikipedia. You can put this information on your User:Katharine1973 page.

I am concerned about the material that you reference with   You appear to be citing a conversation that you had with Weinberger. This is not suitable for citation and would break the No original research rule. If you have a published source for this material then please give it. If there is no source other than your personal knowledge then please delete the text. I have marked the reference using Template:Primary source inline.

I have made numerous edits: to resolve some problems, to make the article closer to the usual Wikipedia style, and some just because I thought they were improvements. Please don't take this personally; it is no longer your article, when you create a Wikipedia article it is fair game for all Wikipedia editors. Editors are encouraged to "be bold". You are free to revert my edits, but please explain why you are doing so either in the check-in comments or on the article's talk page.

What has Weinberger's birth name? Harry is usually short for Harold. Was Harold his original name, or did he change from a German-sounding name when he came to England?

Regards, Verbcatcher (talk) 07:41, 19 January 2016 (UTC)