User talk:Katherine hayes/sandbox

feedback for the fire class
Answer.to.the.rock (talk) 16:51, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Adding information about the Canoe fire would be fine for a short addition.  You should have links to the Ecology section of the article on redwoods, which nicely summarizes the role of fire (with a link to a Ecosphere paper on importance of fire to redwood abundance). Please go ahead and add this..a few sentences would be fine.
 * 2) Thanks for looking over the soil carbon article.  What is your idea for your main article for the class?

Peer review
Hi Kate. Here are some brief comments: -Justin
 * Lead section seems to cover it, though the last sentence doesn't flow with the rest--try to work it into the paragraph, probably near the top.
 * Of course add in citations, at the end of each section/subsection even if it carries into the next.
 * Under Pyro framework, fire regime types, such as....define or give examples or something brief so I don't have to leave the page (through the hyperlink) to understand it
 * Under Fuel Loads, second sentence fragment
 * Under methodology, include how the spatial data is used--how it's analyzed--beyond just what the data sources are.
 * Under Climate-Wildfire Relationships: first two sentences about satellite imagery doesn't seem to belong here; define NPP in-text (not just with hyperlink); make the connection between NPP and climate explicitly--since that's the section header;
 * Under Other Influences--you may just not have added yet, but it seems you'd need more than just deforestation to justify plural use of influences, and subsection title
 * It's looking good!