User talk:Kathleenvoight/sandbox

Peer Review:

I think you have done a great job trying to organize a lot of information. I think the images add a lot to the article to balance out the text. One piece of advice that I have is maybe to break up the last paragraph because it is pretty long, but overall I think your structure is good. - Olivia

Coyolxāuhqui evaluation
The pages focuses primarily on the figure of Coyolxāuhqui, with supporting information on the monument. There is a page dedicated explicitly to the monument (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Coyolxauhqui_Stone) but it is a stub. The articles uses the image of the Coyolxāuhqui stone in the intro section to illustrate the story of Coyolxāuhqui It is unclear why the stone represents a dismembered Coyolxāuhqui, when the introduction seems to imply that it was her mother who was dismembered (this is clarified later in the article). The article is clearly written and informative. The article also features an image of the Coyolxāuhqui stone with its imagined original coloring — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kathleenvoight (talk • contribs) 01:34, 21 October 2018 (UTC)