User talk:Kathy Moses Salem

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Welcome to Wikipedia, Kathy Moses Salem! Thank you for your contributions. I am I dream of horses and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions, feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Questions or type at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes ( ~ ); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding to your message (talk to me) (My edits) @  04:02, 18 April 2019 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Kathy Moses Salem (April 18)
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I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding to your message (talk to me) (My edits) @  04:11, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

COI
You have an obvious conflict of interest, please don't write about yourself and read the guidance below about writing articles here.
 * you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the organisation claims or interviewing its management. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls
 * you must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic.
 * there shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
 * you must not copy text from elsewhere. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. We require that text posted here can be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial; text is considered to be copyright unless explicitly stated otherwise. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient.

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. Jimfbleak - talk to me?  06:02, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

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Thanks for email. I strongly suggest that you create a new account since you are not allowed to use the name of a living person if it's not you. You don't have to use your own name, of course.

The guidance above still applies. If she is a friend or relation (and I notice you refer to her by her first name), you still have a COI and shouldn't be writing about her. There are issues apart from the lack of third-party references as described above.

Firstly, it's not at all clear that she meets our notability criteria. Much of your content is social media-type family stuff, and your references include her own organisation, YouTube and the like, see above. I'm not convinced anyway that "big in Akron" is enough.

More to the point it's blatant spam for her and her organisation. Examples of promo include  boasted successful careers... dedicated and passionate individual... proudly... she would always be sure to help others in need... Her love of music only grew as the years passed.... grew up to become ambitious, successful women and driving forces in their community...  and so on. It's a fan page, not a neutral article. You also put a spam link to her organisation.

If you think you can show that she meets the notability criteria linked above, and  you can find independent third party sources, have a look at Imogen Holst. You don't need that level of detail, but it shows you how to write neutrally and what sort of references are acceptable Jimfbleak - talk to me?  14:35, 18 April 2019 (UTC)