User talk:KatieElizabeth/sandbox

Peer Review
I think that your draft is a good starting point. I like how you compare feminists in Poland to feminists here in America. I think it gives readers a better understanding of what may be going on since we are aware of feminists' concerns here in America. I think you should could contrast them as well. Also, comparing/contrasting Feminism in Poland to other countries (not just America) would also add to this article...or what it means to be a feminist in Poland vs America vs somewhere else.

I also think that this is a great start to your article. I think it is a good idea to compare feminists in Poland to those in America. I think it would be a good idea to write about the concern of reproductive rights of feminists in America so that the reader can see that the concerns of feminists in America are similar to the concerns of feminists in Poland. I think that the structure of your draft is good and flows nicely. By reading your draft, I think that it gives an idea of what issues are discussed in your article without necessarily having to read the entire article. I would find another concern of feminists in Poland to discuss and maybe also compare that concern to feminists that are in other countries such as the United States of America. I think that it would also be a good idea to compare and contrast how women live in Poland versus other countries such as the United States of America. Overall, I think that this is a good draft!H.speedy (talk) 15:21, 21 March 2018 (UTC)Hannah Speedy


 * I like the idea of comparing feminism in Poland to feminism in America, that's something I hadn't thought about before and could definitely be helpful in expanding this article. There are plenty of other issues facing feminists in Poland that I would like to include, so there's still a few sections that I want to add. Reading this also made me think of comparing the situation in Poland to that in the surrounding countries to get a better understanding about how the situation in Poland compares to that in other countries in this part of the world. KatieElizabeth (talk) 02:07, 27 March 2018 (UTC)

I think comparing where the feminist movement is at in Poland compared to other countries is a great idea! We may be able to make an entire section to compare feminism, and what problems they face compared to other countries, as long as we stay on topic enough. Catubbs (talk) 16:24, 27 March 2018 (UTC)