User talk:Katiekassler/sandbox

Peer Review - Lexi
Following the rubric she posted.

Lead Section Introductory Sentence - Short, and to the point. Good Introduction Sentence Summary - summarized all major points in the article content - all topics in the summary were talked about in the article

Article Organization - Article was divided into headings and subheadings according to content, and was presented in logical and orderly fashion. Content Added Section - "In the Media + Dr. Oz" Smaller Additions - Beyonce's music video included the 3 mothers holding pictures of their sons. Added Triumph Awards under the added section "In the Media" Balance - the article is balanced in my opinion. I do not feel like I am being convinced to to take a specific point of view. Neutrality - Again, I do not feel a pull towards a positive or negative viewpoint. The word choice is neutral and the article is factual. I could not guess the perspective of the author of this article.

References Sources - the sources are credible, they are all from the news, magazines, and a credited television show. The 6 sources represent a variety of information, so I do not believe the article is one-sided. All source links work.