User talk:Katiekelsey/sandbox

Hi Katie,

A couple of suggestions; double check the grammar (you have "different attitude" instead of "different attitudes")! Read it out loud to make sure that it flows easily; the sentences feel a little repetitive and tortured. If it sounds odd reading it out loud, it will sound weird in others' heads. Finally, the reference is to communicatewithchristy.com; not to the original Seiter and Gass article. That shouldn't be a problem, but you need to cite it differently. Christy is the author, not Seiter and Gass. Pearson didn't publish her.


 * You improved it. Some of the phrasing is still not perfect "SJT is understanding" should be "SJT involves understanding" or something like that. Good citations. The ego involvement edits definitely improve the flow of the article. Drdemartino (talk) 19:40, 3 November 2014 (UTC)