User talk:Katsuto Abe/sandbox

What you have for the discovery looks good so far but I would suggest adding more to the article. Maybe try adding their life cycle, transmission ways, if theres any possibility for treatment.

Hello! I have a few additional comments: - Schistosoma japonicum, not Schistosomiasis japonicum. - I would suggest adding a sentence to the beginning of your draft which summarizes when and who discovered the parasite. For instance: "S. japonicum was discovered in ____ by _____". - Also - since the current article does not include any information about this parasite in non-human animals, you could add an additional section, maybe "Non-Human hosts" to the article as well. In it you could describe what other animals become infected, and the pathology/impact of infection on these animals/the economy. Agleichsner (talk) 16:41, 9 April 2018 (UTC)