User talk:KatyAleecia37/sandbox

Katy,

I am not sure if your article is set up right. When I click the link to go to your article I see your main headers but there are no descriptions underneath them, only links to the articles you used as references. I do think your topic would be interested to read about especially since a lot of items are made from plastic. You could also add some more sub headers under your agents of deterioration, I know in my previous classes they mention 10 main agents of deterioration. I also like that you added the section of Disaster Preparedness and look forward to reading it when it is all done. (Kzlotnik81 (talk) 21:07, 14 February 2017 (UTC))

Katy, I'm seeing the same thing that Kathryn described. This looks like a good foundation and outline, but I don't see any actual information. I really like that you have a fairly narrow focus and it looks like you have some good reference material. I also like that you've got categories about types of damage, methods of prevention, and preparing for disasters. --BethanyJ7 (talk) 20:49, 18 February 2017 (UTC)