User talk:KaylaBerardi/sandbox

Kayla, this will be ready to launch (and therefore an A!) at the end of class. You need one final proofread with your small group. Make your peer editor read the piece out loud, and ask them to point out any errors that you can fix as they read. Pay close attention to commas (missing where you need them, sometimes inserted where you don't); inconsistent capitalization; and most of all, any language that sounds remotely like it is praising Metcalfe. I have never seen another Wikipedia post include a business's mission statement; unless you have a really strong rationale for keeping it, I say cut it. This is splendid work and a real tribute to Metcalfe!Ssenier (talk) 00:18, 2 May 2019 (UTC)