User talk:KaylaENG3840J/stevemadden

Well you obviously need more information, but the little information you have is good. Once you have your sources with you, you will be able to elaborate more on each topic you've already mentioned. Make sure that you also go in and edit once you've added more info, there are some simple grammar mistakes.

Try to make sure that you write factually and without adding your own personal style to the writing. Don't forget to add markup to make your webpage "wikified." I would also make sure that you start your article with an introduction. Pretend like someone has no idea what or who Steve Madden is. Start by explaining that steve madden is a shoe company who's owner is steve madden himself. Talk about the shoe company separate from the person Steve Madden.

Adding links to other pages will help your article get more views. Things like New York, halfway house, Zappos, Dilliards, Nordstrom, etc.

Es3840j (talk) 16:24, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

Good information of what you have, I thought u did a good job of providing information and not story telling. however, make sure you try and stay away from opinions. seems pretty accurate, I would imagine there is a lot of information on him out there. And pretty much just the same stuff that she said above. just finalize for wikimarkup and you'll be good to go Estan3840j (talk) 16:42, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

You have the right idea and good subtopic lables. Obviously it needs to be written more clearly and in proper style.

Sources need to be added to make it accurate.

There are lots of words throughout that need to be linked including: Macy’s, Dillards, Nordstrom etc.

Rebekah3840J (talk) 16:52, 1 November 2012 (UTC)