User talk:KaylaT3210/sandbox

It was nice to see your thought process and organization for your article! From what I've read so far, there is a logical flow to the information. For some terms, such as catecholamines and norepinephrine, I think that you can define or explain these further to give the reader a better understanding of the bigger picture. I think that the additional of nutritional stress could be a great addition and I would love to read more! The addition of the mechanisms of these processes would be helpful in understanding the importance of these reactions in development under certain conditions. Overall, I think you have a lot of great ideas to work with -- a little more information in a few areas and I think this will be a solid article.

C10ism (talk) 03:08, 11 March 2022 (UTC) c10ism