User talk:Kayshackelford/Bonnie MacLean

The end of the sentence about MacLean's personal life feels a little weird in how it's worded, maybe say "and his absence at their son's birth."

Finally, the comma after 'Throughout her life" doesn't need to be there. Good contributions overall! :) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.249.151.155 (talk) 00:27, 19 March 2021 (UTC)