User talk:Kbache01/sandbox

I really like how all your sections are detailed and backed up with factual information and statistics to show that it is true. I never knew much about Dorchester other than it was just outside of Boston. It is nice to see that community members such as the Umass Boston baseball team, is helping to maintain the Franklin Park area. It shows how much interest they take in where they are living and could be positive role models to others. It is good to hear how the direction Dorchester is changing is into a positive one and how there is plenty of libraries for students, children, parents, whom ever, to go whenever they want to. What was really surprising to me was that you mentioned that 60% of students graduated High School and 12% have associates degree, 44% bachelors. Although this percentage seems decent, I would figure it would be higher but I can also see why it isn't. Students don't have the same advantage that other students have and don't receive the proper education. While we are all trying to work at that and fix this society to make it an even playing field, it will take a while for that to happen. Interesting that you mentioned that, "you would think having a well-known accredited university within close proximity would boost the educational attainment rates" and where I agree with that, it also is kind of depressing for students and families because of how expensive Umass Boston is and how hard it could be for some students to get in. It is like one of those things where you just wish you could go there but know it isn't in your favor, especially families with low income. Overall, you have done a really good job including information and statistics and I learned a lot about Dorchester that I have never known before. Kcabral18 (talk) 23:56, 27 March 2015 (UTC)

Working from the right draft
Hi. It looks like you've copied in the output of a page (with numbers like[10]or[10]). What you'll want to to is click "edit" on the page you plan to copy, then paste the wikitext (the stuff in the edit box, not formatted with links and templates) into your sandbox. If you start from there your citations will work and you can keep the original links and what-not.

If you need a hand with this please let me know. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:59, 7 April 2015 (UTC)