User talk:Kbalamurrugarajan/sandbox

Mechanics
 * Capitalize the S in South Africa
 * Spell check- de-homosexualization

Content Explain the effect rape has on women in India, China, Ukraine, and Mexico
 * Are there certain rules women have to follow?
 * Are women more cautious to roam the streets of their countries or are they comfortable?
 * What has the government done to help its citizens?
 * Are women getting the justice they deserve from these men?

Elaboration is KEY!

What does Free Gender actually do?
 * How do they attract members b/c I know there are a lot of women who are usually afraid to confess that they were raped
 * Are there other organizations that are open to welcoming women from those prospective countries?
 * Is Free Gender available in all the countries mentioned above?
 * What are the police doing to make these changes a reality?

Overall, the information you've written has been informative & neutral, but it's important to add these details so people can have a better understanding of what you're talking about. It's also really important that you cite where you got your sources from since this makes you even more credible.You should also write about the history of rape in these countries and whether or not it has been increasing or decreasing over time.Hannahjameson (talk) 05:26, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

Kanishga, you did a good job making your contribution objective, but I would suggest being more detailed about the chosen topic. A couple of details you could add are statistics about the number of rape cases throughout the years, other organizations aimed at helping victims of corrective rape and their impact, and the history of rape in the countries you listed. I also noticed one grammatical error: the "s" in south Africa should be capitalized. Other than that, it was informative. '''--Yrodriguez17 (talk) 05:49, 25 November 2020 (UTC)