User talk:Kbarlow18

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Team Endgame October 27, 2019 Peer Review Letter

Thank you peers for doing a peer review of our article. We would like to thank you for your feedback and would like to incorporate your suggestions to our article to make it the best it can be.

We plan to make revisions on our article based on suggestions that were made by our peers. As suggested by Brigpaulson15 we will go through our article and add citations where there needs to be some. As suggested by Jessica Cragun we will be adding more information the section of health and safety to make it more informational to the reader of this article. As suggested by Tonilynn Ludwig we will be scouring the internet to add more visuals to the article where we seem fit to try to make the article more engaging and help make concepts easier to understand. As suggested by Kbarlow18 we will try to condense the article in areas that seem like information could be repetitive and long to try to make the article more engaging. As suggested by Mary Polatis we are going to go through our article to clean up the grammar and punctuation of our article to clean it up and make it sharper.

We will continue to make adjustments to the article whether it be punctuation and grammar. Making the article more versatile, and condensing by making information easily understood. We plan on adding information to sections that we think can use more information. Again we appreciate the information and feedback received it was very helpful.

Thanks, Team Endgame. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MiguelG16 (talk • contribs) 04:08, 28 October 2019 (UTC)