User talk:Kboeckl/sandbox

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I'm an online ambassador for your WMST 250: Women, Art, and Culture (2014 Q3) class and have just stopped by to provide a quick review and add what I hope will be helpful comments.

You've done a very nice job polishing the Hilary Tham article, by putting it into sections, performing copy edits, integrating information from an obituary, and adding a partial list of her works.

Some optional ideas are:
 * Add an image of one of the plain book covers without images from here as a PD-simple item.
 * Since there are so many great sources, it might be nice to have a further reading section with books from a google search on "Hilary Tham".

I'll be watching this page and your sandbox page for any updates. You can also "ping" me (just type "" as you see it) to your message on this page or leave a message on my talk page. Happy editing!-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 20:43, 1 November 2014 (UTC)


 * You may want to take a look at Janise Yntema for a sense of what an introduction or lede would look like. Wikipedia articles start with a "lead" section, which is a short summary of everything in the article. For some articles this summary can be a few paragraphs. Others (like Yntema's article and probably this one) can be a few sentences long.-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 03:42, 4 November 2014 (UTC)