User talk:Kbrookins

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Hello, Kbrookins, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Cherry Turner
Hi, Kbrookins. I've made a few changes to your draft. Overall it looks good and ready to be moved to the encyclopedia. One problem I can see is the article relies on this source which doesn't appear to be the best possible source we could have (I don't know what a "A Bio-Religious TIMELINE" is, but that may be a sign that allegory may show up more than we'd normally like). You've got access to other books and information on the subject. Can you update the article to remove that source or reduce our reliance on it? Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:01, 2 May 2016 (UTC)