User talk:Kcabbage/Gaylussacia frondosa

Peer Review
1.) I think your whole article was really well worded! I especially liked the Ecology and Fire Ecology sections.

2.) The last sentence of the description section may need to be reworded. It is a long sentence that I think can be better written in a different way. My suggestion is something along the lines of "When squeezed, the leaf from G. baccata produces a glandular, sticky yellow resin from both sides. G. frondose produces a similar resin, but only from the bottom of the leaf." Using multiple sentences can make this information easier to understand.

3.) The most important thing that could improve this article would be to write an introduction. It doesn't have to be long!

4.) I hadn't thought about putting a fire ecology section in my article! This is something I'd like to look in to adding. I could also add wetland status to my habitat section.

5.) You met the word count! Yay! Honeydewmelon21 (talk) 00:34, 21 November 2023 (UTC)