User talk:Kch02130

Your submission at Articles for creation: TransCultural Exchange (November 10)
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Rankersbo (talk) 07:28, 10 November 2014 (UTC)


 * It has been some time since I reviewed this article, so I don't remember the details. The deletion log says that there was a copyright violation of http://transculturalexchange.org/mission.htm so probably there was either a close paraphrasing of this material, or that you intended this to be a quote but quoted too much. The new version is showing only 32% similarity to your sources, which while it is quite high doesn't say to me violation so I think you won't have this problem with your new page. Rankersbo (talk) 11:33, 23 November 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mary Sherman (artist) (November 23)
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Rankersbo (talk) 06:12, 23 November 2014 (UTC)


 * One suggestion I have is that you need to break up your paragraphs by leaving a clear line. The Mary Sherman page rambles on and on and on.


 * I stopped short with Mary Sherman because of the sentence. "is an artist whose work extends the definition of painting beyond its traditional role as a flat, two dimensional object into the realm of space and time with paintings that move and have sound" This is not a flat, matter of fact description of what she does- it waxes lyrical. Wikipedia prose should not sing, it should speak to the reader and provide them with info. It should not try and convince them that the subject is worthy, it should present them with the bare facts to judge for themselves. Rankersbo (talk) 11:26, 23 November 2014 (UTC)

Wikipedia article: TransCultural Exchange and Mary Sherman
Dear Rankersbo, Thank you for taking the time to review the article I created for TransCultural Exchange. You rejected it citing copyright infringement and that it reads too much like an advertisement. I am interested in what the copyright infringement is because this entry has been written specifically for Wikipedia. Also you rejected my entry for Mary Sherman, you include the need for outside sources as a reason that it seems like an advertisement. I included the many exhibitions Mary Sherman has been invited to and international organizations that have presented her with awards as reliable independent sources and proof of her notable career, in the arts field these galleries and arts organizations are the credentials for an artist. I would appreciate if you would provide further suggestions for how the article might be improved since this is my second effort rewriting these articles. Thank you.


 * OK I've elaborated on my feedback above. I am not an expert in art so it was the writing style I acted on- I don't know whether or not these subjects could pass the notability criterea.Rankersbo (talk) 11:26, 23 November 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you for these suggestions, I will use them to improve and clarify the article. Thank you for taking the time Rankersbo

Kch02130 (talk) 11:35, 23 November 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: TransCultural Exchange (December 26)
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Onel5969 (talk) 14:32, 26 December 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mary Sherman (artist) (January 17)
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LaMona (talk) 22:37, 17 January 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mary Sherman (artist) (February 20)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Samuell1616 was:

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One life to live (talk) 17:55, 20 February 2015 (UTC)

Draft:TransCultural Exchange concern
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Your draft article, Draft:TransCultural Exchange


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Draft:Mary Sherman (artist) concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Mary Sherman (artist), a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:32, 22 August 2015 (UTC)