User talk:Kdh3014

Good job
Good job finishing the assignment and leaving me a message! Keep up the good job! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 05:36, 24 September 2015 (UTC)

User:Kdh3014/sandbox
The course is almost over, and your assignment does not appear to be close to being finished! Please try to finish it by the finals week and show it to me in class! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 08:57, 11 December 2015 (UTC)


 * Regarding your work on Heyri Art Vally, it's a good start, but there are major issues:

--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 20:06, 22 December 2015 (UTC)
 * you need to improve grammar; there are sentences which are not understandable in English
 * encyclopedias are not tourist guides; they should not contain detailed directions (the traffic section is irrelevant)
 * encyclopedias should describe topics, not just list them. Heyri Space section should be rewritten into proper paragraphs
 * your article contained copypaste of non-freely licensed content, i.e. copyright violation; it has been removed
 * your article needs free copyright pictures

Heyri Art Valley
Hello! I stumbled upon your assignment, Heyri Art Valley, and I am fascinated by this place! I have done some work on the article and will continue to expand it. Thanks so much for choosing it as your assignment and thereby introducing me to it! – &#x1D558; wendy &#124; &#9742;  15:35, 3 May 2017 (UTC)