User talk:Kdrutman/sandbox

Your article is solid! There are some grammatical issues with the article, but it is more so the voice/tone that doesn't seem like a wikipedia article (better than mine tbh). Your subject is very interesting and is very informative. Good job!

It would also be nice to focus on her struggle especially as a representative of the indigenous tribes, since most of them live in isolation? Minaseoo (talk) 11:50, 30 October 2016 (UTC)

Also, another suggestion would be to write down specific groups she has collaborated with (amazon watch)! It could add to her article and just show how much she's been involved in this community. Minaseoo (talk) 11:54, 30 October 2016 (UTC)

Response: I have added an entirely new section to my wiki page and will address the minor grammatical issues. In terms of tone/ consistency for proper format for a wikipedia article, I will be checking other notable activist wiki-pages and adjusting these accordingly. I believe I will place a lot more of my focus/ content creation on Sonia's page moving forward to get more content up/ meet word and source requirements. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kdrutman (talk • contribs) 08:07, 11 November 2016 (UTC)