User talk:KeLu0829/sandbox

The beginning of the brief history of Japanese Immigration to Canada could be a little bit clearer. Maybe explain why Japanese people were attracted to Canada and Toronto in particular? Some things need to be cited better particularly in the sections about education. Sentences like "Although Toronto is a city with greater population of Japanese immigrants, these settlers are dispersed among the region. According to a survey conducted by Toronto Board of Education, within 121 public school, all schools had no more than 12 students whose heritage language is Japanese." should have a citation. Your picture is good! Maybe include information about whether it is a Japanese school here in Toronto? You could also enrich your article by adding more pictures that relate to status or demographics. Overall very well written! Andrewtsalmon (talk) 01:14, 2 March 2016 (UTC)