User talk:Kedzierski Patrick/sandbox

Dear Patrick,

I hope you are doing okay and you ate well. As the teacher requested, we have to give our feedback to another fellow and it happened that you are my victim.

After I read your translation, except for one thing, I didn't find mistakes or problems. The present tense seems a bit odd. I checked a Wikipedia article similar to your subject such as https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tesco#Origins and noticed that they use the past tense.

Therefore, my only suggestion would be to use the past tense. I let you the time to think if you agree or not but you absolutely have the right to keep the present tense if you want to.

I hope you'll have a great evening,

See you tomorrow,

Tina

Tphanngo (talk) 18:41, 7 May 2018 (UTC)