User talk:Keegan Sud-Tost

Dctyler (talk) 02:23, 6 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Make sure to proofread your article for spelling/grammatical errors - you have several of them. Example: under "Location," you lack a verb in the second sentence.
 * Your division of the article into sections is logically-flowing and well-done
 * Try to find images to illustrate your topic along with your article
 * If possible, you might want to add more information to the the heading "Function," as it feels incomplete.
 * Overall, you have a strong start with your article!