User talk:Keelseyr/sandbox

Hi, good article. I have attached some links for your reading/interest to expand upon the signs. There's so much more to signs and interpretation that is left open to individuals. http://www.save.org/index.cfm?fuseaction=home.viewpage&page_id=705f4071-99a7-f3f5-e2a64a5a8beaadd8 http://www.health.gov.sk.ca/suicide-common-warning-signs

As you may notice the lists may be somewhat similar, but differ entirely. This is important to take note of. --ChrisJenkins-100460518 (talk) 17:02, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Suicide: A very sensitive topic which is well approached in your article. Some advice would be to expand on the reasons for suicide with a focus on depression. Some articles which would help with the psychoanalysis of depression are listed below to assist in further research:

Ernst, C., Mechawar, N., & Turecki, G. Suicide neurobiology. (2009) Progress in Neurobiology. ISSN 0301-0082 4(89) 315-333

Harrison, C., Bayram, C., & Britt, H. Suicide-related contacts. (2013) Austrailian Family Physician. ISSN 0300-8495 9(42) 605 ChristinaMilburn (talk) 16:54, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

hi this is my sandbox Hi, this is a very interesting article. You may find the following links helpful with respect to research on suicide. Harvard Health and Mayo Clinic. --Amaddalena (talk) 16:52, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Very interesting article. Many people may not be able to read the signs of depression that people may be going through but we can definitely do alot more as a society to improve awareness on this growing issue. Here are two informative links: http://suicideprevention.ca/advocating/public-awareness/ http://www.cmha.ca/mental_health/preventing-suicide/#.VEFSpYfjUtU --Khad333 (talk) 17:33, 17 October 2014 (UTC)

Hey. This is a good article. A good idea for expansion would be looking into suicide within the LGBTQ community. The It Gets Better Project is a great project that communicates within that community to prevent suicide. Here is the link to their website http://www.itgetsbetter.org and a link to statistics related to suicide rates and prevention in LGBTQ communities http://egale.ca/suicide-prevention/. --Nixmixx17 (talk) 16:22, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Hi, this is a great article. I found an article with a few other reasons people commit suicide, you should take that in into consideration, but otherwise good job ! http://www.suicide.org/suicide-causes.html--Sgobeshia (talk) 16:35, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Hello, you seem to have covered a wide array of subtopics within your topic which is great! You should possibly also look into what people are trying to do to help with suicide, such as providing suicide hotlines. http://www.helpguide.org/articles/suicide-prevention/suicide-help-dealing-with-your-suicidal-thoughts-and-feelings.htm http://suicideprevention.ca/ --Fatemah.hira (talk) 16:41, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Really like the Wikipedia page. To expand on the page add a new header possibly about preventing suicide in the LGBTQ community. Found lot of interesting information regarding the topic from these two links: http://www.sprc.org/sites/sprc.org/files/library/SPRC_LGBT_Youth.pdf goodtherapy.org/blog/LGBT-youth-suicide-as-serious-as-it-is-preventable-0916134 (this site is blocked by Wikipedia so I can't include the link) --Jjb2576 (talk) 16:44, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

I really enjoyed reading this! Very informative. Emile Durkheim did a really interesting study on the nature and causes of suicide that you may be interested in looking at. Overall, really well written! http://durkheim.uchicago.edu/Summaries/suicide.html & http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0890856709658445 --Communication1234 (talk) 16:47, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

You should also cover the impact that prescription drugs are having on suicide rates; are they helpful or harmful? http://wp.rxisk.org/rxisk-asks-are-prescription-drugs-causing-suicides/--Can-Rep (talk) 16:52, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

____________ Very intersting topic, very controversial. Japans high suicide rate might prove to be an interesting topic to look into to expand the topic. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Suicide_in_Japan and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_countries_by_suicide_rate might prove useful.

--TheMediator3 (talk) 16:53, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Very interesting! if you wish to expand you page in the future, I suggest to add topics such as prevention and history. Some websites you may find useful are: http://www.helpguide.org/articles/suicide-prevention/suicide-prevention-helping-someone-who-is-suicidal.htm ,http://www.theglobeandmail.com/life/health-and-fitness/health/ottawa-research-chair-to-focus-on-suicide-prevention-receives-2-million/article20975388/

Great article. To expand on it maybe you could incorporate some ideas on how to prevent suicide. Here are some cites you could use. http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0165032700003566 http://qjmed.oxfordjournals.org/content/97/10/677.short

--ErinComm (talk) 17:04, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

With the recent death of Robin Williams via suicide, I think you could also add in death amongst people who are in the public eye, aside from your topic of just teens and suicide. Here are a few interesting articles about his death, and how it has effected suicide hotlines and brought more attention to the matter: http://www.newsweek.com/two-months-after-robin-williams-death-suicide-hotlines-still-see-spike-276813 http://www.nbcnews.com/storyline/robin-williams-death/robin-williams-death-inspires-coming-out-about-depression-n180656 --MadelaineSouthwell (talk) 17:08, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

One of the cases of suicide connected to cyber bullying that always sticks in my mind is Amanda Todd. I remember this story shaking the world. Here's an article about her story here: http://nobullying.com/amanda-todd-story/ Also here's a link trying to end cyber bullying: http://stopcyberbullying.org/index2.html --M4Munro (talk) 17:16, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

I enjoyed reading your article, some ways you can improve your article are by talking about the relation between suicide and the internet. You can also expand your article by looking at some statistics on suicide. http://www.meganmeierfoundation.org/statistics.html --Jennifer mk (talk) 17:22, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Hi. Very detailed and interesting article on suicide. I have a couple of suggestions I hope you consider to make your article even more of an in-depth analysis of suicide. I highly recommend you include the more specific statistics on suicide in relevance to gender. You can find more info on this from the following two webpages: http://www.forbes.com/sites/alicegwalton/2012/09/24/the-gender-inequality-of-suicide-why-are-men-at-such-high-risk/ and http://www.suicide.org/suicide-statistics.html --Devitee (talk) 12:54, 15 October 2014 (UTC)

Hi, great article on suicide. One thing that you could add is statistics of suicide such as the ones on the following web page. http://www.statcan.gc.ca/tables-tableaux/sum-som/l01/cst01/hlth66a-eng.htm You can also add information about organizations against suicide like the organization on this website. http://www.save.org/index.cfm?fuseaction=home.viewPage&page_id=705D5DF4-055B-F1EC-3F66462866FCB4E6 --Ramya24 (talk) 13:00, 15 October 2014 (UTC)

Very interesting and very well written article. You might find this article interesting showing a factsheet about who is most likely to commit suicide in Canada http://www.ctvnews.ca/factsheet-who-is-most-at-risk-for-suicide-in-canada-1.706169. This is another article that might interest you. It shows the worldwide statistics for suicide http://www.suicide.org/international-suicide-statistics.html. --Nehalchauhan96 (talk) 22:50, 19 October 2014 (UTC)

Hey, very good article on suicide. Here is a couple articles on the statistics of suicide : http://www.save.org/index.cfm?fuseaction=home.viewPage&page_id=705D5DF4-055B-F1EC-3F66462866FCB4E6 http://www.statcan.gc.ca/tables-tableaux/sum-som/l01/cst01/hlth66a-eng.htm--Jaytos (talk) 17:45, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

Great article! I found your section very interesting. I think it would be good to expand your section by adding a part on how to prevent suicide--this will go great with what you already have. http://suicideprevention.ca/ and http://www.helpguide.org/articles/suicide-prevention/suicide-prevention-helping-someone-who-is-suicidal.htm Also, here is another article where people can learn about suicide in more cases, where someone ended their life. This article a glimspe on what's is happening. http://www.helpguide.org/articles/suicide-prevention/suicide-prevention-helping-someone-who-is-suicidal.htm Enjoy. --Laceandchains (talk) 00:58, 22 October 2014 (UTC)