User talk:KeelyCzartorski

Hiya KeelyCzartorski!

This is in regards to your edits to the article: Lahser High School.

I recently had to go in and remove a lot of information that you added. I am not 100% sure what you added versus what other had added already, but I wanted to give you some advice in writing articles for Wikipedia.

1. Information added to the article needs to be able to be cited from a reputable third party source ..... a book, an article in a magazine or newspaper, and especially good: a link to an on-line source.

2. It is generally a good idea to avoid mentioning current staff members and students for privacy reasons, unless these people are notable for some reason other than being a teacher or student there (like a student wins an Olympic medal, or a teacher wins a national award, etc).

3. Athletic schedules are considered "unencyclopedic" bits of information. You could create a section for outside websites, and include a link to atheltic schedules there.

Please do not take this personally: this does not mean you are a bad writer or that you don't know what you are talking about. I urge you to look at the articles written for other high schools to get a feel for what is included in articles like this (one of hte best I know of is Plano High School -- I haven't done any work on it, but it is a very well written article).

Good luck and happy editing. LonelyBeacon 22:14, 25 September 2007 (UTC)