User talk:Keithmacfarlaine

Your submission at Articles for creation: OIB Group (December 27)
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RedFlame (talk) 13:34, 27 December 2017 (UTC)

OIB Group
Greetings. There are numerous sentences which are not yet inclined with citation. It is vital that information on articles are cited as they may be factually challenged which will resort to deletion. There are still paragraphs without any inclined citation. Hope you fix that before the next reviewer reviews it. And, you could create an infobox for the company. EROS message 12:39, 11 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: OIB Group (January 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

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KJP1 (talk) 21:58, 23 January 2018 (UTC)