User talk:Keithrichard39

INTRO: (1) "His work eschews normal artist's materials"- Perhaps using the word "traditional" would be more descriptive than "normal", as the latter can have flexible meanings

BIOGRAPHY: (1) "and showed the influence of Milanese proponents of Nuclear Art, such as Enrico Baj." - Consider adding a link for Nuclear Art

GALLERY AZIMUTH: (1) "the event was recorded further complicates the role and space of art as it was expected to be seen"- As it was expected to be seen by...the public?

DEATH: (1) The anecdotes about Manzoni's death should be delineated not only from the subsection "Artist's Shit", but also from the larger section Gallery Azimuth. (2) "Ben Vautier, who also pushed the boundaries of art to their limits, began signing deaths as his work."- Perhaps describe what you mean by "signing deaths". Do you mean death certificates?

Vsmoon (talk) 18:05, 1 April 2013 (UTC)

Where are references? Hindustanilanguage (talk) 18:06, 1 April 2013 (UTC).

"His later works, from approximately 1957 until his death in 1963, questioned and satirized the status of the art object as it had been conceived throughout modernism." Bring evidence, analyze a selection of pieces that support this statement. PollonApollo (talk) 17:13, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

Because of chronology and art terminology, defining Manzoni a Conceptual artist could be seen as controversial. PollonApollo (talk) 17:25, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

"Italian artists such as Manzoni had to negotiate the new economic and material order of post-war Europe through inventive artistic practices which crossed geographic, artistic, and cultural borders." It is great to contextualize Manzoni's work, but try to connect the artist's practice with the historical background more clearly. How does Manzoni's work exemplify a form of reinterpretation of the new economic order of post-war Europe? Could you discuss his interest in and appropriation of everyday objects? Or his détournement of some dynamics of the "society of spectacle"? PollonApollo (talk) 17:25, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

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