User talk:Kellyhunt/sandbox

Hi Kelly, in doing your peer review I am very impressed by your sandbox, I am struggling a bit. So I can't give you to much advice on what to improve sorry. But it looks and sounds like your doing great! --Rayelaine02 (talk) 04:00, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you Rayelaine02. I watched the training videos a few times each to figure how to do this project. I was having a hard time too. I hope it is getting easier for you. Kellyhunt (talk) 03:56, 2 April 2018 (UTC)Kellyhunt

Hi Kelly, This is a start, but not detailed enough for full credit. What other things might you change as you find out more? Did you find an entry for Sheridan Downey on the Biography in Context database? Please look there--and in ebooks--and post what you find to your Sandbox next week. Springerhe (talk) 00:51, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

graduated from University of Michigan in 1907 Kellyhunt (talk) 01:55, 26 February 2018 (UTC)k3llyhunt

I did find the Biography in context for Downey. I have been using that as much as possible. Finding the other books that were listed as sources originally is quite the challenge. I am still looking and plan on using my time this week to find them. I will be making a trip to the library in the very near future. Kellyhunt (talk) 00:22, 6 March 2018 (UTC)kellyhunt

I was able to add more citations to the Politics sections and corrected some run on sentences. I am now moving on the US Senate section with citations and sentence structure. Looking into if there is more that can be said about him during his in the Senate. I will be adding information about Downeys ideals of the war and the draft. Kellyhunt (talk) 22:09, 8 March 2018 (UTC)kellyhunt